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أبريل 29, 2005

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يندرج تحت تصنيف : شعر على قد الحال — freesoul83 @ 7:29 م

شوفت الخيانة بتترسم
شوفت البراءه بتتهدم
و ضلمة الليل و المسى
عيشت المرارة من الندم
لئيت احلامى بقت عدم
و ف قلبي الف جرح و أسى
فى قبورها المنى بقت رمم
و تراب الخيانه عليها ردم
مش شكلها مش رسمها

فى يومها قلبى اتعدم
من حبه مات لما انحرم
و ف يوم هيحيا من الوفا

لازم ف الدنيا لازم وفا

Written: 19/8/2000

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  1. Here I’m back again :) pleasure writing in your blog :)

    This is a very nice poem, reminds me of Muhammad Mounir’s songs, which is one of my favourites…

    How about paying a visit to my blog? hope you’d like the posts there :)

    Comment بواسطة # Juwaireyah # — أبريل 29, 2005 @ 8:30 م

  2. The pleasure is mine :-)

    keep visiting me, I really appreciate your opinion, the poems I write looks silly to me now, but I was much younger at that time, the point I can’t deny is, it still carry a great deal of my soul, and I want to share my soul with everyone, so here they are, they are all yours ,but no guarantees you will like it :-(

    Comment بواسطة free soul — أبريل 30, 2005 @ 5:49 م

  3. This poem reminds me of Ibrahim Nagui’s poetry. It has a very romantic style.

    Did you read a lot when you wrote them…I mean what were your influences? :)

    I wanted to put my arabic poetry on my blog..but I don’t have arabic characters now..I think it would have been fun to compare.

    Comment بواسطة Steliano Ponticos — مايو 1, 2005 @ 4:30 ص

  4. Welcome my friend steliano,

    hmm, in that period of my life, I used to read alot in everything, but not in arabic poetry, I used to read english peotry for a while.

    Thanks , I will be waitting for your poems, I like to read others work too :-)

    Comment بواسطة free soul — مايو 1, 2005 @ 6:55 ص

  5. Ana Alby Et2a66a3 ya Majed kefaya … 7aram 3aleek :-P … bass gamda 3ala fekra … enta betfakkarny be2eslob el Abnoudy .. enta bet7ebbo ?

    Comment بواسطة Ahmad El-Saeed — مايو 1, 2005 @ 4:06 م

  6. Hi ahmed, finally you are back here, welcome :-)

    I don’t know the answer of your question as I don’t read arabic poetry much, but I love the black romatic style in general.

    I published some other stuff, will wait to know your opinion :-)

    Comment بواسطة free soul — مايو 1, 2005 @ 4:16 م

  7. ahmad, el abnoodi 3ala baladi aktar ye3ni his poems are more polular, ana bshoof free soul 3endo 2osloob 2a7mad rami a little bit, just a little bit…yasoo

    Comment بواسطة Steliano Ponticos — مايو 2, 2005 @ 10:32 ص


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